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This blog was a tool used as part of a Research Writing course I took at IUP (Indiana University of Pennsylvania) with Marlen Harrison. It chronicles much of the activities and learning processes throughout the class revolving around our research paper. Mine focused on the social implications surrounding regional dialect and identity, titled- Pittsburghese: Pride and Shame Surrounding Sociolinguistic Oddities and Regional Identity.  

To protect my work, I have deleted the final draft of the paper, along with any information that was too specifically personal.

I’ve left this up on the chance that it may be used a resource to other students looking for information online. If you have any questions or comments about the work you can also email me directly at spelch88@yahoo.com

Dear Marlen,

            This class sure was classy. Reflecting back on this process as a whole brings a smile to my face and a spark to my brain. As it goes with many experiences in life, there were aspects of this class that turned out exactly how I predicted, and some that surprised me. I could tell from the first day that this class would be something different, and it was (in a good way).  I sensed that your teaching style was very different in the fact that although you place an incredible amount of expectation and work on the students, the whole learning process is very self-lead which is why it turned some people into heroes and some people into their own worst enemy.

            Although it seemed very daunting in the beginning due to all of your email caveats and first day scare tactics, this class was not as hard as I thought it was going to be. This occurred when I realized that your point system was a sham, we were all getting A’s and this whole thing was just an endurance test. The entire introduction and set up of the class is to motivate students to do their personal best, and you’ve successfully discovered that a great way to do this is to use fear. It is what pushed many students, including me, to start with good momentum in the course. I think this helped many realize we should not be fearing you and your grading, but rather our personal limitations, whether they be laziness, procrastination, or ignorance.

           There were times when I became very frustrated with the class though. During the period before we actually started writing our papers, I sometimes felt that the work I was doing didn’t really “count” because of the large amount of writing you assigned, I often questioned if you read our blogs in their entirety, if ever. Because of this the class seemed like a paradox in many ways. The self motivation/no point system can bring out the best in a student, but because it is so self lead it was very hard at times to motivate myself to write things I knew that probably only I would ultimately closely read. This is of course the result of 15 years in an education system where much of the motivation derives from a desired point value or need to impress a teacher, whereas you wanted to challenge us to impress ourselves.

            Overall I absolutely loved the blogs, especially in the beginning. I felt like it was my baby and I had my own little place in cyberspace. Most of the entries helped me learn about research and the research writing process because of using established sources and then having to find my own. Sometimes though, I felt like you were trying to make the class so challenging, that you squeezed in too much work that was not always beneficial to the students. So many times, I just wanted to come to class and do something PRODUCTIVE instead of just TALK blah blah blah. Mainly, I think the whole required reading books and the book tests were a waste. We didn’t spend any time discussing the relevance in class, peoples books were all over the board, and making us read a book for one measly book test online didn’t seem worth it. Also, we didn’t even have time to follow through with a second book/test. Maybe it would have been more helpful if you would have given us a careful selection of only 3-4books, that way a class discussion and peer support would be relevant, and we could have spent time talking in class discussing research aspects about the book to make our time and effort reading seem more relevant instead of doing individual test and gaining nothing intellectual from it. With that being said, I actually loved the book I read (Snowflower and the secret fan) but it didn’t contribute anything to my learning relative to the actual class.

            To be blunt, I would have loved to see what this class would have done for students at a more academically established school with a student body that is actually intelligent as a whole (basically the opposite of IUP). I know you’re proud of the work we did and personal struggles we overcame etc, but through reading other papers on peoples blogs, the writing ability of people at this school seems reallllly low. Like really low. I wondered sometimes if you were upset to be working with some of these students whose writing skills were so incredibly poor. I thought most of the papers in and of themselves, sucked. For example, did you ever wonder what it would have been like to do this at Pitt or Penn State? Your results probably would have been out of this world. I really don’t mean to sound rude I’m just being honest. I can tell though that you did succeed to inspire many people to ACTUALLY do their best, and I thoroughly enjoyed reading those papers that accomplished this through cathartic and personal means.

            I truly truly did enjoy this class, and I still feel impressed and lucky that your overqualified self stumbled upon shitty little IUP to teach it here. The learning environment you created for all of us is absolutely astounding, from the level of comfort to the personally revealing relationships that somehow worked out both academically and personally for all of us. I think this was pretty evident on the last day, which was basically just one huge Love Fest. I’m proud of myself and I’m proud of my classmates, so what more could you ask for? Honestly Marlen, you an amazing person. You make yourself available to your students on every level, and you’ve accomplished so much in life, it is impossible for any conscious person not to admire you in every way. I can unwaveringly tell you that I have truly gained great things from this class. GOOOODD LUUUCCCKKKK with your next step in life and THANK YOU THANK YOU so much for this experience!!! 

-Stephanie Pelch

Provided Documents

Results

    Must be qualitative as well as quantitative

  • Should give meaning to the data
  • Present either by subject, or as a whole and follow up with discussion
  • Cite figures and/or tables in the Appendix properly
  • Clarify results
  • Do not load down with excessive or unnecessary language

Discussion

  •  Provide accurate interpretation to reader
  • Identify how this data relates back to your hypothesis
  • Compare your results with other studies of a similar nature
  • Use an active voice for the majority of the time
  • Talk in the first person sparingly
  • Address each section in the order you presented it in your results section

Conclusion

  •  Wrap up overall ideas of the article
  • Give meaning to the overall meaning of the research process
  • Conclude what you ultimately learned from the primary research
  • Avoid rephrasing the thesis
  • Avoid emotional appeals and overused stereotypical phrases

Researched Documents

How to Write a Research Paper – Results Section

  •  Summarize all relevant findings
  • Make use of tables and figures when appropriate
  • Connect the context of results with specific parts of hypothesis
  • Use past tense and active tense when describing results
  • Number figures and tables consecutively for better clarity and organization

 Writing a Discussion Section

  •  Share personal interpretation of all work and results
  • Conclude any open ended questions/results brought up in results section
  • Limit graphs and figures, use only those relevant to your findings
  • Potential to criticize results in comparison to others
  • Compare to previous work done on the subject and possible use as support
  • Connect discussion to points made in the intro methods section

 Writing a Conclusion

  •  Attempt to answer all questions presented throughout the paper
  • Summarize everything that your research has shown
  • Reflect back on what you discussed in Introduction and hypothesis
  • Discuss if the research has still left some questions unanswered
  • Discuss whether or not the research will be relevant in the real world

REFERENCES

 Caprette, D. (2007, Aug 20). Writing Research Papers. Retrieved March 31, 2010, from Rice University’s Website:          http://www.ruf.rice.edu/~bioslabs/tools/report/reportform.html.

 Shuttleworth, M. (2009). Writing a Discussion Section. Retrieved March 31, 2010, from Experiment-Resources: http://www.experiment-resources.com/writing-a-discussion-section.html.

 Shuttleworth, M. (2009). Writing a Conclusion. Retrieved March 31, 2010 from Experiment-Resources: http://www.experiment-resources.com/writing-a-conclusion.html.

My methods concerning this primary research will hopefully be as accurate as they are stereotypical, consisting of surveys, questionaires, and discussion groups. I plan on targeting people both from Western Pennsylvania as well as those who are not to get a sense of what both sides feel towards this concept of Pittsburghese. This will be a component of research within itself because in each survey and/or discussion the participant must identify their area of origin in order to help analyze the research. I am aiming to target young adults between the ages of 18 to 35, as I am trying to grasp a new and uncharted area of the exploration of Pittsburghese and I believe that looking to a younger generation will help with the modern aspect of this research.

I plan on handing out physical questionaires throughout the IUP campus as well as distribute them among my friends both at IUP and at home. I will also administer the same survey online and will use Facebook as an advertising method to entice people to participate in it. All answers of course will be anonymous, as the onl content applicable to the research will be demographic and not specifically personal.

Method and Research Design of The Language Center

  • Includes methods of collecting both primary and secondary data
  • Highlights how it was analyzed
  • States intention and validity of the information
  • Explain any errors within research and how those errors were fixed
  • Prove to the reader that information is relevant
  • Establish trust with the reader through specific details and procedures
  • Illustrate how as an author you gained understanding throughout the process of data collection

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Research Methods in Psychology of the University of Central Florida

  • Describe how the Data was or is to be collected
  • Specify the intentions and be specific!
  • Identify why it was felt that this data collection would be relevant to the Research Question
  • State how you found and selected the participants for the study
  • List what outline or format for the interview or discussion was used and how you came about this research method
  • Outline the procedures used in the collection process
  • Tell the reader how relevant information was pinpointed
  • Give examples of why these methods of procedure and collection are sound

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REFERENCES:

Writing up Research: Method and Research Design. Retrieved on March 14 2010 from Language Center of Asian Institute of Technology Website: http://www.languages.ait.ac.th/el21meth.htm.

Brophy, J. (2007 , January 11). Research Methods in Psychology: Methods Section. Retrieved March 14 2010 from College of Arts and Sciences at the University of Central Florida website: http://www.reach.ucf.edu/~psy3214a/apa/method.html

Rubric

Here is the Rubric for my Analysis of “Why Are Killing Rampages Increasing?”

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Lit Review Documents

1) The library at Deakin University outlines the structure of lit reviews and stresses the importance of relevance for mentioned literature. Some main points include:

  •  justify the background of the intended field
  •  state the authors stance on the issue or research question
  •  relevance relevance relevance!
  •  mention opposing views of previous literature
  •  place current work in perspective to previous work done by others
  •  use this as an instrument to make sure not to “reinvent the wheel”
  •  develop credibility of the author

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2) The Writing Center at The University of Wisconsin at Madison addresses literature review writing by breaking down the review itself into “intro”, “body” and “conclusion” sections. These do not necessarily need to be any specified lengths, but compartmentalizing them may help the writing of it. Key points are:

  • it can be “self contained” with its content, or set up the body of the whole paper if need be
  • after defining research topic/question, identify previous opinion of published works
  • establish writers individual view of previously published works relevant to the topic
  • address both qualitative and quantitative aspects of past research and how they relate
  • summarize any past discoveries  or innovations in any fields that may pertain to the research point

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REFERENCES:

          Deakin University. (2009). The Literature Review. Geelong, Victoria, Australia: Author.
Retrieved 1st March 2010 from the World Wide Web:
http://www.deakin.edu.au/library/findout/research/litrev.php

          The University of Wisconsin-Madison Writing Center. (2009). Writer’s Handbook: Common Writing Assignments: Review of Literature.
Madison, Wisconsin: Author.
Retrieved 1st March 2010  from the World Wide Web:
http://www.wisc.edu/writing/Handbook/ReviewofLiterature.html


Blog #9 – torture

From Barbara Johnstone’s:

“How to Speak Like a Pittsburgher: Exploring the Role of a Folk Dictionary in the Production of a Dialect”

Paragraph 1

Comments on the background and previous work of the subject are talked about with specific references to Sam McCool’s Sam McCool’s New Pittsburghese: How to Speak like a Pittsburgher. Johnstone then states the thesis at the end of the paragraph, which is that she believes historical and analytical approach to understand any metalanguage such as Pittsburghese.

Paragraph 2

She continues to bluntly state her stance on the subject and what approaches she will take in the paper to prove her point by referencing past work and how her historical approach will investigate dialects with time.

Paragraph 3

She discusses McCool’s book and its transformation of original publication in the 80s, and how it was republished to reflect the culture with black and gold themes, and how it is often displayed in souvenir shop. She also mentions specific Pittsburghese words and the format of the book.

Separately, An example of the word “cahch” is presented and defined.

Paragraph 4

She references a handout and makes examples of specific words found in the text by commenting on their monophthongal pronounciations. Also discussed is the fact that some speech patterns thought to be exclusively Pittsburghese can be found elsewhere in the country, but also mentions ones that are indeed unique to the Pittsburgh region.

Paragraph 5

Participle choice compared to other English speakers are discussed. She also mentions that some “Pittsburghese” speech patterns sound similar in nature to how African American speech is perceived and gives a couple of vocabulary examples.

Paragraph 6

Johnstone tries to clarify what Pittsburghese is from a linguistic perspective by classifying it as an “orthographic respresentation of casual speech.” Again it is closely compared to speech dialects of North and South Midland American speech, and Appalachian speech.

Paragraph 7

She reminds the reader of the true metalinguistic aspect that is Pittsburghese, for it is “talk about talk” (Johnstone).

Paragraph 8

The linguistic concept of Enregistration is defined and different factors that contribute to metalanguages are listed and include political and economic conditions, and social and discursive practices.

Paragraph 9

RP, or Received Pronunciation is discussed as referred to researcher Asif Agha and talks about how this separation from the rest of the English language is a “socially recognized register” (Agha 231).

Paragraph 10

Historical references to the Carnegie Library of Pittsburgh, past newspaper articles, and other publications are mentioned as sources of information for the source and origination of the dialect. Ethnic backgrounds of immigrants must be taken into account as well as the searching for formation of identity.

Paragraph 11

The beginnings of enregisterment of Pittsburgese first appeared in papers throughout the 1950s and 60s, but were not included as part of the serious or real news, and were taken lightheartedly.

Paragraph 12

Curiosity about Pittsburghese continued to grow throughout the 1970s and the first publication to call it so was published by Robert Parslow, who was a University of Pittsburgh dialectition.

Paragraph 13

Gradually, the thought of Pittsburghese as a local language or dialect started to become legitimized and taken seriously.

Paragraph 14

The growth of its legitimacy is further discussed, as well as the standardization of some words and phrases. Specifically used as an example is the word “yunz/yinz.”

Paragraph 15

By the time McCool’s book was published it had already gained the reputation of a dialect by the Pittsburgh population, and even included an accepted alphabetized dictionary of terms.

Paragraph 16

The publishing and social history of “How to Speak Like a Pittsburgher” is discussed as well as Parslow’s perceptions towards it, for it was very similar to his own.

Paragraph 17

Because McCool’s book was so similar in appearance to Parslow’s, plagarism was suspected, and although they were structurally similar, the content differed and there was no copyright infringement nor was their plagarism.

Paragraph 18

The acceptance and accuracy of the book was accepted, for the Pittsburghese T-shirts (an example of enregisterment) that became popular in the 1990s used many of the same terms quoted in the book.

Paragraph 19

The Discussion section, Johnstone reiterates the fact that these books only recognize dialects, and that further research needs to be done on the process of sociolinguistic enregisterment in order to fully understand the concept.

Paragraph 20

She claims that this process is based on history of a region, says that understanding it requires historiography, and closes by stating the importance of discourse analysis

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From Barbara Johnstone’s:

 Representing American Speech

Paragraph 1

Johnstone speaks of past research done regarding Pittsburghese as well as different methods of dialect research conducted about it. She speaks of the acceptance of the metalanguage and gives specific examples of words that are widely accepted as being “Pittsburghese” such as “babushka” and boilermaker.” She contrasts Sam McCool’s “How to Speak like a Pitsburgher” with the academic journal “American Speech” and the different approach to the dialect. (oddly enough this article was published in American Speech.”

Paragraph 2

Popularity concepts and informal analysis is compared to the technical linguistic studies done in the past. She lists the typical questions that dialecticians ask subjects in their studies that deal with local communities and their speech.

Paragraph 3

She discusses the contradictory nature of the fact that although McCool’s book was not thought to be academically sound, it is the foundation for many of the research done on the subject of Pittsburghese and was used as a reference during the transition phases of Pittsburghese being accepted into academia.

Paragraph 4

Approaches for sociolinguistic research differ from case to case and are discussed however she makes it known that it is impossible to grasp every tiny detail of such languages. Also noted is the fact that even academic analysis should be taken as yet another analysis and not the ultimate word on the topic or language.

Paragraph 5

The modern importance of local dialects is discussed.  Locals of metalanguages (including those of Pittsburgh) have to make the personal and conscious decision to accept a new dialect and to accept it as an identity. The products marketed around Pittsburghese (magnets, bumper stickers, t-shirts etc.) are given as examples of this commitment to identity. The analysis of McCool’s book is then said to be a “concern” for the publication of American Speech.

At the end is a brief biography of Johnstone, a professor at Carnegie Mellon University of rhetoric and statistics.

The difference between the introduction and the lit review for each of the articles was that the introduction gave the reader an overall scope of the topic at hand, whereas the lit review referenced past work done on the subject very specifically. Additionally, the lit reviews commented on the validity of past research and papers to the current articles, as well as how the past lit review work was received at the time of original publication.

I found the the author tried to hook the readers interest, as I stated, by referencing past work on the subject. By doing this, the author is establishing relevance about their topic and is a great transition into what the subject of the paper is. The theses were also clearly stated and the research questions were made evident several times throughout the introduction.

“How to Speak like a Pittsburgher”

a) The objective was to inform and convince the reader of the importance of registration with sociolinguistic aspects of local dialects, specifically Pittsburghese, and the importance of history in the understanding of this process.

b) The significance deals with reevaluating what scholars thought previously about recognition of dialects by looking at past evidence and finding new meaning in their thoughts by creating different interpretations of them.

c) How has history and local enregisterment affected and created Pittsburghese throughout the 20th century?

d) The methods dealt with examining past work, specifically that of McCool’s, and analyzing how those concepts were interpreted by linguists.

e) Indeed many local perceptions were adopted from his observations and although it is not considered a scholarly document, its contents were the building blocks for much of what is considered Pittsburghese today.

f) It is recommended to delve even further into the past history of Pittsburgh’s linguistic practices.

“Representing American Speech”

a) The objective was to compare and contrast approaches of Pittsburghese from the past and present and question what is considered to be legitimate.

b) The significance deals with the original definitions of Pittsburghese and if they are at all relevant to current academics.

c) Were the original publications dealing with “Pittsburghese” legitimate enough to be considered scholarly and should the information within them be accounted for by  modern standards”

d) The method simply dealt with comparing past and present publications and discussing American Speech’s opinion towards them.

e) American Speech is concerned with the “legitimacy” of past documents.

f) The principle of questioning past research is taken into account and it is encouraged for further research towards enregisterment on the subject to be conducted.

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BIBLIOGRAPHIC INFORMATION:

          Johnstone, B. (2000). Representing American Speech. American Speech, 75(4), 390-393.

          Barbara Johnstone. 2006. “How to Speak Like a Pittsburgher: Exploring the Role of a Folk Dictionary in the Production of a Dialect” Paper presented at Sociolinguistics Symposium 16, Limerick, Ireland
Available at: http://works.bepress.com/barbara_johnstone/19

The insights of all knowing about.com provided several examples of great introductory paragraphs and sentences; a good reminder of what it really takes to capture an audience. It suggests using some of the following to grab a reader:

  • Surprising Fact
  • Humor
  • Quotation
  • Curiosity
  • Definition
  • Anecdote

While using any of these in the very beginning of a paper will gain attention, the following sentences must be equally thought out and somehow support the content of the first. Also critical in an introductory paragraph is the Thesis Statement. This has been drilled into our heads since 6th grade. We get it. However, a solid thesis statement is critical to a well-formed work and is critical to understanding and perception as the reader continues line by line. Another helpful suggestion made is to return to the first sentence and thesis statement after you have finished writing the paper. This ensures, after finishing, that these beginning sentences will actually be an accurate reflection of what you just wrote about.

YET ANOTHER USEFUL SITE…

http://www.eslgold.com/writing/marathons.html

We all know what an Introductory Paragraph is, so I searched for a good site that would classify them as well as give specific examples of each type. I found just that at ESL Gold, an online English teaching Resource. It classifies introductory paragraphs into the following:

  • Description/Narration
  • Classification
  • Comparison/Contrast
  • Process Analysis
  • Casual Analysis

This page is cool because it provides a different example of each for the same subject, to give an idea of the actual formation of each type.

BIBLIOGRAPHIC INFORMATION:

          Fleming, Grace. “Introductory Paragraph- How to Write a Strong Introduction.” About.com. The New York Times Company. Web.

          ”Introductory Paragraphs: Marathons.” ESLgold.net. ESL gold, 2005. Web. <http://www.eslgold.com/writing/marathons.html>.

          The “Evaluating Sources” document from Cornell’s Library was very beneficial and straight forward. It wisely begins by stating all of the tools of evaluation one can use immediately upon finding a source to decide whether or not to take it into consideration, and compares this to the scanning of a web site’s homepage (Ormondroyd). The potential reader can do this through the use of evaluating the credibility and reputation of the author, the publication, and the publisher. Relevancy for the topic should then be considered, especially important information such as what works the potential article cites, and when the article was published or last edited (Ormondroyd). If these aforementioned qualities are found suitable the reader must next analyze the actual content of the article. The intended audience should be one of the first things noted, and additionally whether or not the perspective of the article comes from an objective or subjective thought process. This can be analyzed from opinion, valid information, and point of view (Ormondroyd). Lastly, things such as overall coverage of a topic, the style of writing used, and whether or not it contains evaluative reviews should be taken into account (Ormondroyd). By implementing all of these tools, a researcher can save time and find information thoroughly.

          Many results for websites contained extremely similar information that was provide by Cornell. Texas A & M provided additional information. The website I found on the University’s website outlines the processes readers should go through when they find an article they are considering using to support their work. The content is rather similar but the layout is slightly different for they took a “question approach”, making the information seem like a thought process and therefore very understandable. It also stresses the importance of the credibility of the author and publisher, and gives advice on how to do a “quick content check.” This includes but is not limited to checking the table of contents, the sources, and the index (Texas A & M). It continues to comment on important issues such as consideration of coverage and style. It closes by noting that while doing research one should never rely on a singular source, author, or perspective, and that one should attempt to use various types of sources during research (Texas A & M).

Best Points to Take Away From Articles:

  • the credibilities of author and publication must be the first thing considered so you don’t waste time.
  • scan over the the entire article first if it seems credible.
  • check the citations within the appropriate article to measure appropriateness.
  • do not forget to analyze style, coverage and audience.

Evaluation of Sources:

          All of the sources I indicated would be useful were either written by two authors. The first being  Barbara Johnstone, and the second Maeve Eberhardt. Barbara Johnstone holds an incredible amount of credibility as she is considered one of the leading experts on Pittsburghese. The two articles written by her I am most interested in were both published in American Speech, a peer reviewed and well respected journal. I have also browsed both of these articles, and found them both very valid towards my topic through a linguistic perspective. The third source written by Eberhardt I would choose would be the piece specifically dealing with a sociolinguistic perspective of pittsburghese. It was published through Interscience which is a reliable database that publishes renowned articles from thousands of respected journals. I found all three of these articles to be relevant and valid to my topic.

Bibliographic Information:

          “Critically Analyzing Information Sources.” Texas A & M – University Libraries. Texas A & M University. Web. http://library.tamu.edu/help/help-yourself/using-materials-services/critically-analyzing-information-sources.

          Eberhardt, Maeve. “The Sociolinguistics of Ethnicity in Pittsburgh.” Wiley InterScience. Blackwell Publishing Ltd, 18 Sept. 2009. Web.

          Johnstone, Barbara, Neeta Bhasin, and Denise Wittkofski. 2002. “Dahntahn Pittsburgh”:Monophthongal /aw/ and representations of localness in southwestern Pennsylvania. American Speech 77:148-166.

          Johnstone, Barbara, and Dan Baumgardt. “Pittsburghese Online: Vernacular Norming In Conversation.” American Speech 79.2 (2001). Americanspeech.dukejournals.org. Duke University Press. Web.

          Ormondroyd, Joan, Michael Engle, and Tony Cosgrave. “Critically Analyzing Information Sources.” Olin & Uris Libraries. Cornell University Library, 1 Sept. 2009. Web.

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